Thursday, April 10, 2014

What i've learned over the past 8 weeks...

Over the past few weeks ive learned a lot of things such as how to end a story, tons of vocab, and a lot of new ways to write. I think taking this course over these weeks has improved my quite a bit and my final story I handed in I can honestly say i honestly enjoyed writing. It was also nice to have a teacher that wasn't to strict and was nice enough to help out once in a while if we needed it. Lastly i just want to write I enjoyed having Mr. Ludwig as a teacher he's a cool dude : )

Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Hint fiction stories

Rashid walked inside the store. He could not find the correct juice he wanted. Rashid then walked out angrily.

Robert looked at the computer with a blank stare. He was trying to find a new topic to write about. Robert got bored and fell asleep.

I patiently walked in the class and sat down. The teacher walked up to me & asked for a pass. I didn't have one and got sent out.

Wednesday, February 26, 2014

500 word short story.



June 27, 1998 in Harlem New York 16 year old Ronny is walking his little brother Jo-Jo home from school when all of sudden they hear a loud crackling noise that sounded similar to fireworks “pow pow pow” Ronny looks over and sees a man with a pistol half way out of the window of a black truck shooting at another man that seems like he’s about to return fire but before he can he drops and Ronny grabs his little brother and sprints up the street. High off his own adrenaline Ronny is able to run through at least 3 streets with his brother over his shoulder before he gets
tired.  
As he puts Jo-Jo down he says “Ron you know that car drove in the other way
some time ago… you ran for no reason” Ronny then proceeds to slap Jo-Jo and says “you don’t know what could happen on these streets because bullets have no name so watch your ass lil nigga” they then walk home.  As they entered their home they are greeted by their mom who then ask them how their day was in which Ronny replies “it was good till the end” and walks upstairs to shower.
Ronny often spent time he should have been in school trying to find a job he felt he should try to be independent instead of depending on his mom all the time. Most places Ronny went he was rejected nobody waned to hire a kid who had very poor grades, poor choice of vocabulary and last but not least sagging his pants below his butt.
 The next day Ronny goes to goes to the pizza place around the corner but is yet again rejected.
As he walks out there’s a kid standing there with his hood on someone begins to pass him and he pulls something out his pocket and they begin a quick exchange by initiating a hand shake.  As quickly as it begins it ends and the man walks off “Yo you need something what you staring for?” the hooded boy says to Ronney “nah I’m just a nigga out here looking for a job feel me?” Rodney says “Oh word?” the hooded kid says as he hands Rodney a small bag of white stuff that kind of resembled baby powder.
“Give this to a nigga that live on 701 Scrantom Street he waiting for a delivery” the hooded kid said Ronny so he went to the address and delivered it and from that day on Ronny learnt and became a drug dealer. One day Ronny got caught up with the wrong guy and in the process of dealing him the drugs he was shot and left in a alley all alone bleeding out. Ronny was at deaths doorstep until someone saw him and called the ambulance immediately. In the hospital Ronny decided that he wasn’t going to deal drugs anymore.

Tuesday, February 11, 2014

Something i feel passionate about...

The first thing that comes to mind has to be family. I mean come on most people are passionate about their families they've been there since birth raising you, keeping a roof over your head, keeping you fed, and keeping clothes on your back. No matter what family are the people who wont turn their back on you. Family are the people you are bound to by blood. Family is everything.
Hello, My name is Justice welcome to my blog for my creative writing course. I am a 15 year old student who attends School of the Arts in Rochester New York. I am still learning a whole lot during these last couple years so bare with me if I make mistakes.